The wind blew, chilly again,
Salty, crisp, it rang in my ears,
The old man sitting on a seaworn bench
I was a bad friend.
Small crabs moved in the dunes' tiers,
Under new weight, the boards wrenched,
There we sat, two distant men,
I was a bad friend.
A lone gull waits, hovers,
Drifting along, in solidarity,
So did we in our parity,
The crabs crawl to cover.
The shadows twist, slowly,
We knew this wasn't the end,
I was a bad friend.
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Please comment, I try my best to return the favor!
Edit: June 21st 07
The shadows twist, bend,
changed to:
The shadows twist, slowly,
Edit: June 21st 07
The shadows twist, bend,
changed to:
The shadows twist, slowly,
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i definitely like it and you wrote it well
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